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Hey little me,
Come, we have to talk
We could stay right where we are
Or we could go for a walk

Because, you see
I have things I need to tell you
Because you need to know
And what I'm gonna tell you, it's true

Whatever we do
We keep moving forward
It's impossible to go back
Even though you push so hard

Whatever you do
Keep looking in front of you
Because if you don't look where you're going
You trip, stumble and fall

I know
You know?
Off course you don't
Nobody ever told you, right?

I can see it now
But I wish there was somebody to tell you
What they said
It wasn't true

You are
Pretty, enough, kind and bright
Not
Ugly, fat, wrong, stupid, never right

You are ok
Just the way you are
I wish you didn't have to hurt
Wish you didn't have to scar

Because you are a precious little thing
All you needed was...
Well I don't really know
Maybe some applause?

You tried your best
I know
If they told you that
Maybe you wouldn't turn out the way I am now

Little girl I used to be
You'll be loved
Even though you'll always feel
Unloved
Written for the January contest Understood-Accepted

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storystosee Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
You reminded me of this song www.youtube.com/watch?v=P7EM29… 
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qwibes Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2014   Writer
JennyDalziel said the same thing :D 

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SheDares Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2014  Student General Artist
Great minds think alike ;P
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qwibes Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2014   Writer
Exactly :D 
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SheDares Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2014  Student General Artist
:dance:
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storystosee Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist

Really? haha :D

I watch Jenny too. I think it's great you two know each other as well :)

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qwibes Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2014   Writer
;p
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storystosee Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:hug:
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AsiaOneMoon Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
It's very good. ^^
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qwibes Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2014   Writer
Thank you ^^
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