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Hey little me,
Come, we have to talk
We could stay right where we are
Or we could go for a walk

Because, you see
I have things I need to tell you
Because you need to know
And what I'm gonna tell you, it's true

Whatever we do
We keep moving forward
It's impossible to go back
Even though you push so hard

Whatever you do
Keep looking in front of you
Because if you don't look where you're going
You trip, stumble and fall

I know
You know?
Off course you don't
Nobody ever told you, right?

I can see it now
But I wish there was somebody to tell you
What they said
It wasn't true

You are
Pretty, enough, kind and bright
Not
Ugly, fat, wrong, stupid, never right

You are ok
Just the way you are
I wish you didn't have to hurt
Wish you didn't have to scar

Because you are a precious little thing
All you needed was...
Well I don't really know
Maybe some applause?

You tried your best
I know
If they told you that
Maybe you wouldn't turn out the way I am now

Little girl I used to be
You'll be loved
Even though you'll always feel
Unloved
Written for the January contest Understood-Accepted

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scarletwave Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2014
This is... accurate. I hated being your age.  But then it got a whole lot better at about 19 for a good ten or twelve years so there is that to look forward to... Something happens.  Lotte, you will let yourself be when it is time, I should guess.  But I am inwardly so confident your world is going  to change; I just wish I could give you a glimpse.  Do me  a favour and let yourself believe a little bit, a safe amount. xDDD 

I really like this work.  I would like to submit it to my group.  If you would be so kind to join.  We are very ... yes.  :iconfoshoplz:  It is called TheIllustrious .  Come and give it a gander, would you?? I would be honoured.  I am sure my partners in crime would be as well.

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qwibes Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2014   Writer
I do let myself be actually. 

I actually joined your group yesterday ;)
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storystosee Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
You reminded me of this song www.youtube.com/watch?v=P7EM29… 
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qwibes Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2014   Writer
JennyDalziel said the same thing :D 

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SheDares Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2014  Student General Artist
Great minds think alike ;P
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qwibes Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2014   Writer
Exactly :D 
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SheDares Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2014  Student General Artist
:dance:
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storystosee Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist

Really? haha :D

I watch Jenny too. I think it's great you two know each other as well :)

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qwibes Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2014   Writer
;p
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storystosee Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:hug:
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